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I think I will wrote the critique in English well ^^'

As I see , the colours you done is pretty good yet brave. Although the colour blending isn't too matched each other , but it's still nice to see.

What bothering me is each character's expression. Also their pose and angle as well. I understand their posing is like on the poster (or pinup , something like that) but try to match their expression somehow , because I saw one is smiling but the others don't (except their personalities are just like that)

Overal it's a pretty good art. I admit I really love your colours , your shading isn't bad as well. But as I said earlier , try to 'live up' their poses. And then , your art will be perfect ^_^

Mimi~