Pinku

I've never done a critique using the actual system, but here goes. I'll try. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww" />

First off, the colours are beautiful as usual and you seem to always have a great understanding of colour scemes and using various colours in one object to add depth. I love the colour of her shirt, it goes nicely with the background which looks as beautiful as her herself.

I only have a few real ' problems' with this one. The first is the hands. I am very picky about the way hands are drawn, and I realize they are hard and you did a good job.. but mostly the one hand that is to the right of the picture looks strange.


If you spread out her fingers I feel that it would look more relaxed, or like it is being slightly pushed with the wind. With her fingers 'glued' together it looks unatural.

Not very nice to look at in a picture as calm as this seems for me. Her other hand looks like it needs some work as well unfortunately. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="hmm" />

This angle on a hand is hard for me to criticize, but maybe her knuckles shouldn't be as high up if you understand what I mean. Sorry that i can't be that much help with this part of it.



Last is possibly only an opinion, but her waist seems a bit too small. The ribbon around her waist could very well make it possible to force it that small, but it looks like she might be lacking ribs in comparison to the placement of her shoulders and hips.

But I could very well be wrong with this. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Shrug" />

Sorry that I can't be more help, but you're a very good artist. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> Keep it up.