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Pinku by NataEliza Pinku by NataEliza
Artrade with :icondongminae:
I'm waiting your Leimuh :XD:

i tried fix and recover my artwork which it is loss of many details..........
you saw it ,right?
I do better in drawing girls than boys TAT

Painting trees really reminds me about painting with acrylic in canvas.......
Yes, painting in digital also is adapted from painting in traditional



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done with pscs4 100%

theme: Mika Nakashima - No Answer

EDIT: retouched the pic again. It was lost harmony. I will reply u guys later, sry

as you see, this is NOT sai artwork!!!
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I've never done a critique using the actual system, but here goes. I'll try. :aww:

First off, the colours are beautiful as usual and you seem to always have a great understanding of colour scemes and using various colours in one object to add depth. I love the colour of her shirt, it goes nicely with the background which looks as beautiful as her herself.

I only have a few real ' problems' with this one. The first is the hands. I am very picky about the way hands are drawn, and I realize they are hard and you did a good job.. but mostly the one hand that is to the right of the picture looks strange.


If you spread out her fingers I feel that it would look more relaxed, or like it is being slightly pushed with the wind. With her fingers 'glued' together it looks unatural.

Not very nice to look at in a picture as calm as this seems for me. Her other hand looks like it needs some work as well unfortunately. :hmm:

This angle on a hand is hard for me to criticize, but maybe her knuckles shouldn't be as high up if you understand what I mean. Sorry that i can't be that much help with this part of it.



Last is possibly only an opinion, but her waist seems a bit too small. The ribbon around her waist could very well make it possible to force it that small, but it looks like she might be lacking ribs in comparison to the placement of her shoulders and hips.

But I could very well be wrong with this. :shrug:

Sorry that I can't be more help, but you're a very good artist. =) Keep it up.
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kuchiki-kikyou Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
Oh wow I love the cherry blossoms (:
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Chemical-Exorcist Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
WOWWWW everythins about the picture is perfect!!!
The Sakura trees, the clouds, and i really love the girl's hair and pose!! ^^ she looks so pretty!!!~~
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Antaros Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Phenomenal palette.
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findra Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
mantap tante.... wonderful color
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Shirei-Shou Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
pose ama effect pinky yg di dapat dg perpaduan latarnya bener2 menarik ^^
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reisconrad Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2009
Stylenya balik lagi :D

Nice composition, terutama yukatanya, matching sama pohon sakura yang ada d belakangnya. Lalu untuk langitnya juga dah ok :D
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alibolong Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009  Student Interface Designer
wah baguuus!
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NataEliza Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2009
thanks~
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alibolong Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2009  Student Interface Designer
sama2 XD
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Ap0c0lypse Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2009  Student Interface Designer
wow! Great!
I think this is one of your best artworks.. the gesture n BG are awesome~
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